Disgracelands
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« on: August 15, 2009, 03:45:23 PM » |
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Here's a simple idea that evryone else can build on if they want to. I'll call the central characters NunA & Nun B for the sake of writing.
The scene starts with 2 nuns trying to escape the clutches of the evil Vampire nuns in the cemetery. NunA is bitten on the arm in the chaos. NunB pushes the vampire away as blood flows from NunA's wound. The pair manage to evade their pursuers and come across an old building. They make their way inside and manage to barricade themselves away. The two attaempt to calm down & NunB uses part of her dress to cover NunA's wound in attempt to stop the bleeding. Nun B explains that she needs to check the other rooms in the building to make sure its safe. She reassures NunA saying that she wont be far away. NunB leaves to check the building. As NunA starts to calm down she starts to hear voices inside her head. Sweet, seductive voices telling her to give in to the evil satanic lust. Kinda like the "Join Us" thing from Evil Dead. NunA starts to experience slow yet subtle feelings of sexual euphoria. She tries to resist. Eventually it becomes too much to bear and she falls to the floor, massaging herself all over. She hears a scratching sound at the door and a voice coaxing her to open it. She does so, letting in a Vampire Nun. The VN quickly takes advatage of the situation and a sex scene with the two begins. After the 'turning' has commenced, NunB enters the room. Seeing the blood dripping from the mouth of NunA, a look of horror spreads across her face. VN tells NunB that she is too late and that NunA is already one of them. NunA looks up from the floor at NunB, licking the blood from her lips. An animalistic hunger has been awakened in her and NunB is going to satisfy it. NunA pounces onto NunB and the scene ends with NunA on top of NunB, sucking her dry whilst VN stands and smiles at the work of her newest 'recruit'.
Well, whaddya think? I think the set pieces might become an issue but improvisation is a wonderful thing. Plus this is just a guideline, its not like anythings set.
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« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2009, 04:07:56 PM » |
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it involves 3 characters which is cool but not much room for the running. i think we may be able to recreate part of that scene. where does blasphemy fit in? or is there no blasphemy in this one?
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Disgracelands
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« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2009, 04:15:59 PM » |
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Hmm.....if you needed blasphemy then perhaps during the 'voices' bit, she could start repeating the things she hears in her head. For example, if she hears the voices say "abandon christ, give in to sin" she could say "Fuck christ, fuck the bible, I give myself to sin" or something along those lines. Also as the setting is an old religious building then some various religious artifatcs such as prayer beads, mini-statues, dusty bibles, old crosses, etc could be lying around to be used in whatever fashion deemed necessary during her 'falling' (if you can call it that).
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« Reply #3 on: August 15, 2009, 04:23:33 PM » |
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hey i like that that's clever! Really cleaver. can they start off as nuns?
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« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2009, 05:48:33 PM » |
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Sure, why not. You've done these kind of things before so if you think something'll add to the initial idea then I'm all for it.
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« Reply #5 on: August 15, 2009, 05:53:29 PM » |
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awesome!
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« Reply #6 on: August 15, 2009, 09:50:19 PM » |
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this sounds like a great idea too. It reminds me of the video "thriller" except with nuns and vampires.
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« Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 08:30:00 AM » |
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i think this could really work. just will take some planning.
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« Reply #8 on: September 16, 2009, 11:08:54 PM » |
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Touching on that. Nunb comes in as nuna is a full vampire kissing and licking on VN, the interuption angers VN. NunA attacks nunB stripping her down and holding her for VN. They toy and tease nunB before they feed and convert her to the unholy union.
Just a thought.
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« Reply #9 on: September 16, 2009, 11:33:12 PM » |
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Touching on that. Nunb comes in as nuna is a full vampire kissing and licking on VN, the interuption angers VN. NunA attacks nunB stripping her down and holding her for VN. They toy and tease nunB before they feed and convert her to the unholy union.
Just a thought.
i like!
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« Reply #10 on: October 16, 2009, 06:30:09 AM » |
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aha! that takes 3 people again though. maybe for christmas?
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« Reply #11 on: October 16, 2009, 11:05:53 AM » |
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YEA, for the unprecedented blasphemous 3 way scene!!!
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« Reply #12 on: October 24, 2009, 07:31:30 AM » |
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muahahahahaha
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